Moths in My Stomach

I wrote a story for a contest where the word limit was fifty words.  Here it is:

Alfie closed his eyes, and tried to control his breathing. He concentrated on not squeezing Riley’s hand too hard. He didn’t want her to know how scared he was, but his stomach was doing flip-flops and he thought he was going to vomit.

“It’s ok, the ride’s almost over.”

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